| Eyes
of the Snake
A Feature-Length Screenplay
by Mark Barkawitz
FADE IN:
The following quote appears:
"I and the public know What all schoolchildren
learn, Those to whom evil is done Do evil in return."
W. H. Auden
EXT. HILLSIDE NEAR PASADENA-NIGHT
The sliver of a moon hangs crookedly in the
black, starless sky. The area is crowded with POLICE and
their squad cars, an ambulance, PARAMEDICS, and Coroner’s
wagon. Searchlights and flashing color bars atop the vehicles
light up the night. DETECTIVE JOHN REESE, a big man around
forty with a furrowed brow, talks with the CORONER, which
is spelled out in large, yellow letters on the back of his
jacket. Nearby, a station wagon pulls to a sudden stop.
HARRY DOYLE hurries out the driver’s side. About the same
age as the detective, his neatly-shorn hair is unkept, as
if a hand rather than a comb has been run through it, and
his mouth is set tightly in a square-shaped jaw. Wearing
an off-the-rack sports coat and the tie loose around his
neck, he runs for the hillside below, where yellow-white
beams of light from the flashlights move in and out, back
and forth, indicating the search in progress. But before
he can descend the hillside, Detective Reese moves quickly
into his path.
DETECTIVE REESE
Don’t go down there, Harry.
HARRY
Get out of my way, Reese.
DETECTIVE REESE
(grabbing his arm)
You don’t want to see her like this.
Harry pushes Reese out of his way and DISAPPEARS
into the brush down the hillside, where more searchlights
criss-cross. Seconds later, OFF-CAMERA, we hear Harry’s
mournful cry:
HARRY
(Voice-Over)
No-o-o!
Like the howl of a lone wolf at the moon,
it echoes in and out of the hillside canyons.
INT. HARRY’S BEDROOM—NIGHT
Sitting bolt upright in the king-size bed,
Harry wakes in a cold sweat. His hair is untrimmed and streaked
with gray and the lines around his eyes have deepened. Breathing
heavily, he realizes he has been dreaming again. He reaches
over to the nightstand, on which rests a framed picture
of an attractive blonde woman in her mid-thirties, standing
outside a church with her likewise blonde teenage daughter.
From the drawer, he retrieves a half-empty bottle of whiskey
next to a black steel handgun. Quickly, he unscrews the
cap and sucks down a shot. Slowly lowering it from his lips,
he leans back on the bed and cradles the whiskey bottle
to his bare, heaving chest. A breeze blows the curtains
at the open window, through which a full moon shines.
EXT. SOMEWHERE OUTSIDE OF BARSTOW—NIGHT
Under the full moon, an RV is parked on an
unlit dirt road. The interior lights turn the drawn curtains
on the windows yellow-orange, like the burning eyes of an
over-sized jack-o-lantern.
INT. RV—NIGHT
The bedroom door opens and a MAN STEPS INTO
the room, but we only see the pair of custom-made rattlesnake
skin boots he wears. With eye sockets on either side, the
toe of each boot looks like the rattler’s head about to
strike. As the door closes, we follow the boots across the
carpeted floor, stepping over thick, black extension cords
that run to a stand of lights and a video camera on a tripod.
A school uniform—blazer and skirt—are strewn next to the
bed. The man’s hand, on which he wears an ornate silver
and diamond ring, lays a half-smoked, brown cigarette in
an ashtray next to a pair of scissors, a rubber Ronald Reagan
head mask, a small make-up kit, and a pile of cut-out pictures
of nude women, posing. His hand picks up the pictures and
methodically drops them on the carpet surrounding the bed,
then reaches over and turns on the camera.
INT. AUDITORIUM—DAY
At the monthly meeting of the floral society,
Harry sits in the last row of the AUDIENCE, who are mostly
senior citizens. Wearing a slightly rumpled suit, pad and
pencil in hand, he is oddly out-of-place behind his dark
glasses. On the dais, the CLUB PRESIDENT, a matronly senior
with white hair, continues announcements concerning upcoming
events. But a disinterested Harry is having trouble staying
awake. As he begins to nod off, the ELDERLY WOMAN in the
floral print dress next to him, elbows him in the ribs,
startling him.
HARRY
Huh?
He sits up quickly. But having disturbed the
orderly proceedings, all eyes are already turned on him.
He pretends to clear his throat, smiles, and feigns interest,
as the president continues her announcements.
INT. SHAKEY’S BAR—DAY
The downtown bar is small, dark, and empty
except for SHAKEY the bartender/proprietor, who stands behind
the bar, wiping glasses clean with a bar towel. On his T-shirt
is the bar’s logo—two hands tightly holding a shaker. His
meaty bicep is tattooed with a red heart and a dagger stabbing
through it. Harry ENTERS through the front door and sits
at the bar. Without asking, Shakey draws him a glass of
draft and a shooter of whiskey.
SHAKEY
How’s it goin’, Harry?
HARRY
Shakey, there’s only one thing worse than sitting through
two-and-a-half hours of Floral Society monthly.
(shoots down whiskey; grimaces)
Having to write about it.
Chasing it with the beer, he tosses a ten-dollar
bill on the bar. Without waiting for change, he gets up
to leave. Behind the bar, Shakey continues cleaning glasses.
SHAKEY
See you tonight, Harry.
Without turning, Harry raises his arm to wave
goodbye; EXITS.
INT. LOS ANGELES UNION—DAY
The offices of the daily newspaper are busy
with REPORTERS and OFFICE WORKERS toiling at their desks
or criss-crossing in the aisles between them. Only Harry,
leaning back in a chair at his desk, his eyes hidden behind
sunglasses, and a blank screen on the computer monitor before
him, doesn’t appear busy. From across the room, with sleeves
rolled up and a pen leaking in his shirt pocket, JAKE BERK
the editor, a balding work-aholic who is ten years Harry’s
senior, APPROACHES.
JAKE
Damnit, Doyle! What the hell is this? You want me to fire
you?
But Harry doesn’t move.
JAKE
(continuing)
I’d hoped transferring you to the Style Department might
rattle your cage. But look at you. Fluff or no fluff,
Harry. I need that goddamn story, goddamnit.
Reaching for his mouse, Harry calls up a file
on the computer. He wears a plain, gold wedding ring. On
the screen, appears a story entitled, “Shrinking Violets
Have Their Day.” Jake leans over Harry’s shoulder, reads,
then takes the mouse to transfer the story to his computer.
JAKE
Go back to sleep.
But as Jake turns to leave, he almost bumps
into SYDNEY OLSEN. Around thirty, she is attractive, career-oriented,
and recently hired to cover hard news—the front page stuff—Harry’s
old beat. She wears a stylish suit/dress.
OLSEN
(referring to Harry)
So this is what a Pulitzer Prize winning reporter looks
like?
Harry continues to relax, as though he weren’t
the topic of anyone’s conversation.
JAKE
You’re new around here, Ms. Olsen. Things—people—aren’t
always as they first appear.
Midway through his explanation, Jake notices
the leaky pen in his shirt pocket, sighs, removes pen.
JAKE
(under his breath)
Shit.
(to Olsen)
Anything new on that hostage situation at the bank?
OLSEN
I’m on my way back down there now. Police aren’t saying
much besides the usual P.R. I’m trying to get an interview
with the bank president. He was at home when they took
over the bank.
JAKE
You think he’ll talk to you?
OLSEN
I’ll make him think we’re trying to help.
(half-smiles)
I’m good at that.
JAKE
We are trying to help.
(shaking head)
Let me know.
As Jake turns to walk away, a young COPY BOY/ARNOLD
PENSKY ENTERS in a rush. With his arms full of office supplies
and his black-framed glasses slipping down his nose, he
bumps into Jake. Oddly, they are dressed alike, except for
the glasses and the copy boy’s pocket protector with its
numerous pens.
COPY BOY
Sorry, Mr. Berk. I-I didn’t see you.
(trying to push glasses back up without dropping supplies)
My fault. Definitely my fault.
Without answering, Jake calmly pushes the
supplies back into Arnold’s arms, then hands him the leaky
pen.
JAKE
Do something with this.
Patting him on the back, Jake EXITS, muttering
to himself. Arnold puts the leaky pen in his pocket protector
and EXITS in other direction. Olsen comments to herself:
OLSEN
So this is how they run a newspaper in La-La Land.
She, too, shakes her head, then starts to
walk away. Still lazing at his desk, Harry turns his head
slightly, and from behind his shades, watches her EXIT.
INT. SHAKEY’S BAR—LATE NIGHT
It’s near closing time. On the TV behind the
bar, Cal Worthington is standing on his head, selling cars.
An empty shot glass sits next to a half-empty beer glass
and a few loose dollars on the bar in front of Harry, who
is passed-out with his head on his arms. On the stool next
to him, sits a LADY LUSH with springy hair, drooping eyes,
and a long cigarette between her fingers. Behind the bar,
Shakey attends to closing duties. A few OTHER PATRONS sit
at tables in BG. The Lady Lush tries keeping a one-sided
conversation going with Harry:
LADY LUSH
. . . so after my second husband run off, I was gonna
join the Navy. Ya know, see the goddamn world. But then
I figgered I’d seen enough of it already goddamnit.
She laughs alone, smokes, drinks. On TV in
a replay of the eleven o’clock news, an attractive LADY
NEWSCASTER with a stiff, blonde hairdo reports an end to
the aforementioned hostage situation at the bank:
LADY NEWSCASTER
. . . and although police now have both bank robbers in
custody, psychologists agree it will be years before many
of the hostages are able to put this nightmare behind
them.
SHAKEY
Closin’ time. Drink ‘em up or I pick ‘em up.
Shakey carries a plastic trash can full of
empty bottles from behind the bar and EXITS to alley. On
TV, the Lady Newscaster segues to the next story:
LADY NEWSCASTER
San Diego police are looking for a missing teenager. They
now believe seventeen-year-old Patricia Long was abducted
on her way home from high school yesterday afternoon.
And although police are down-playing any link between
this and last month’s kidnapping of a sixteen-year-old
Santa Barbara schoolgirl, the similarities are striking.
Two, side-by-side pictures of blonde, teenage
schoolgirls appear on screen; one wears the same school
uniform with crested blazer as was on the bedroom floor
in the RV.
LADY NEWSCASTER (cont.)
(VO)
Both are approximately the same age. coloring, and each
disappeared on her way to or from a Catholic girl’s high
school.
(CUT BACK TO Lady Newscaster)
Anyone with information about either of these cases is
asked to contact their local police department.
RE-ENTERING from the alley with the empty
trash can, Shakey reaches up and turns off the TV. Finishing
her drink, the Lady Lush rises, turns to the still-sleeping
Harry.
LADY LUSH
Thanks for the rousin’ conversation, honey.
But as she is about to leave, she reaches
over and snags a ten-dollar bill from the money in front
of Harry. Smiling to herself, she turns, but before she
can make her getaway, a hand reaches from behind the bar
and grabs her arm. Shakey stares across the bar at her.
Dropping the money, she wrenches her arm free.
LADY LUSH
Whatta’ you? His goddamn babysitter?
As she stumbles towards the front door, Shakey
looks down at Harry, still slumbering next to his drinks
on the bar.
EXT. DARK STREET—LATE NIGHT
A gray-primered ‘Vette parks in front of a
dark house in a middle-class neighborhood. The bondoed,
fiberglass door on the driver’s side opens and Shakey GETS
OUT. He goes to the passenger side and helps a drunken Harry
OUT of the car and up to the front door of his house. He
reaches into Harry’s coat pocket for the house keys.
INT. HARRY’S HOUSE—NIGHT
Inside the dark livingroom, the front door
opens. Flipping on the light switch, Shakey helps Harry
INTO the house. The room is a mess of old newspapers, empty
beer cans, TV dinner trays, et cetera. Shakey dumps Harry
on the couch, who immediately falls back to sleep. Looking
around at the room’s condition, Shakey shakes his head.
On top of the TV is a pile of unopened mail. An overdue
electric bill is on top. Shakey picks it up, exposing an
ad mail card on which is the photo of a missing boy and
the words: “Have you seen me?”
SHAKEY
(looking at bill)
Harry, they’re gonna shut-off your electricity again.
But Harry is asleep, so Shakey puts the notice
into his own pocket. On his way out, he turns on the lamp
next to the couch, so Harry won’t trip and fall in the dark
if he wakes. Shakey turns off the light switch on the wall
and EXITS out door. In the soft, yellow light spreading
down from the cone-shaped lampshade, Harry curls into a
fetal position. Below him on the carpet halfway under the
couch, lies an old, yellowed newspaper. The headline reads:
“Missing Student Found Murdered.” In the B&W photo below
the headline, a blonde teenager in school uniform smiles
for her high school picture—the same girl who stands on
the church steps with her mother in the framed picture on
Harry’s nightstand.
INT. L.A. UNION—MORNING
Into a glass of water, two Alka-Seltzer tablets
drop and fizz. Sitting at his desk behind dark glasses,
an unshaven Harry props his chin on his hand and waits.
INT. EDITOR’S OFFICE—MORNING
In his shirtsleeves, Jake stands at his office
window with the publisher MR. HERTZ, both staring out at
Harry. Hertz is a few years younger than Harry. Under his
impeccably-groomed hair and whisper-thin moustache, he wears
an expensive, three-piece suit.
HERTZ
I’ve allowed this to go on for too long.
JAKE
He’s been with the paper a long time, Mr. Hertz.
HERTZ
(turning from window)
That’s why I’m telling you, Jake, not only as his boss,
but as his friend. Clean him up now or he’s history. It’s
been three years since his daughter was murdered. Time
enough for him to get over it. We have a newspaper to
run. That’s the bottom line.
They both turn and look out the window at
Harry again, who holds his nose and shoots down the bubbling
glass of antacid.
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