| Foggy
An Original Short Screenplay
by Mark Barkawitz
FADE IN:
EXT. ALLEY--AFTERNOON
EDDIE HUCK--a lean, wild-eyed sixteen-year-old,
who wears a T-shirt with a KROQ logo, loose-fitting jeans,
and new high-top tennies--runs. Chasing angrily behind him
are THREE TAGGERS, also about his age. They wear extremely
baggie garb with skinheads and red bandana headbands. Though
racially diverse, they are otherwise indistinguishable from
one another.
EDDIE
(Voice-Over)
My name's Eddie Huck. You probably heard of me on the
news or if you read the papers. I'm the one they made
sound like a lost soul. A loner. A runaway. But even before
it all happened-- the shootings and killings, I mean--
even then I was one of those guys who never quite fit
in. Always the odd-dude-out. The last one chosen. The
brunt of the joke.
(still running; glancing over shoulder)
So I guess there's no use lyin' about it--
in the sixteen-plus years that I hung-out
in that treacherous part
of the planet called Los Angeles,
more than once, I thought about running away.
To where? I didn't know.
Something just told me, I had to get away.
(increasing his speed)
Fortunately, I had practiced for my journey.
As Eddie continues to extend his lead, the
taggers curse him from behind. He looks over his shoulder
and smiles to himself, confident in his ability to outrun
his pursuers. But as he approaches the cross street which
intersects the alley, a polished metallic low-rider screeches
to a stop directly in front of him. Still looking backwards,
Eddie runs into the fender, which knocks the wind out of
him and leaves him laid-out on the hood, gasping.
EDDIE
(continuing VO)
Of course like any other guy my age,
cars were another part of my story.
The door opens. The tattooed gang leader,
I.N.K., STEPS OUT.
End pg. 1
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